In your Writing History Response, you added significantly more explanation of what experiences you have had as a writer. I am still wondering who you are as a writer (your writer identity) and how your experiences shaped your beliefs about writing.
In your Exploratory Essay, you delete content to provide more clarity. You still have content issues you did not address.
In your Annotated Bibliography, you added very strong analysis. As you keep writing in the future, pay attention to when you should (not) use first person.
In your Joining the Conversation piece, you explain the distinctions between middle and working class well. You need to work on integrating quotations throughout your paper. In some spots, you don’t explain the quotes and pile one on top of another. Then, in other places, you don’t support your ideas with any quotations.
Dear Brian,
ReplyDeleteIn your Writing History Response, you added significantly more explanation of what experiences you have had as a writer. I am still wondering who you are as a writer (your writer identity) and how your experiences shaped your beliefs about writing.
In your Exploratory Essay, you delete content to provide more clarity. You still have content issues you did not address.
In your Annotated Bibliography, you added very strong analysis. As you keep writing in the future, pay attention to when you should (not) use first person.
In your Joining the Conversation piece, you explain the distinctions between middle and working class well. You need to work on integrating quotations throughout your paper. In some spots, you don’t explain the quotes and pile one on top of another. Then, in other places, you don’t support your ideas with any quotations.
Megan